When I breathed Last time
It was a plea
That my heart made for first time
" don't leave me"
When I breathed Last time
There was an urge
That my feelings made for first time
"don't let me submerge"
When I breathed for Last time
There was a hope
That my Life had for the First time
"This time I can't slip off the slope"
When I breathed for Last time
I know you too breathed
That we both breathed together for The last time
"I Love you"
3 comments:
sahiii yaar, kya poem likha hai...
kya words hain, kya rhyming pairs hain-urge n submerge(mun budigali be to poem re padhila bele-pura merge)...
keep it up dude, u r not far from a booker prize
@ Ram Thanks A load yaar, U all keep me encouraging
hey..
really liked ur poem
thanks..
garima
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