Lost in woods, I wonder
Why we all spread terror,
Is it that, we are in horror
Or is it that, we just love to murder.
Rome coined the term "terror"
with loads of error
Wiki acknowledges its confusion
when it says there is no definition,
So lost in woods, I wonder
Why we commit this error.
We kill in name of religion,
Others kill us in name of restoration
Both are forms of same terror
now which is far from being over
So lost in woods, I wonder
Why we all love to murder.
Blood of innocence, Is it what we strive for,
Destruction of peace,Is it what we live for,
Is it that we have lost faith
Or has forgotten the value of a breath
So lost in woods, I still wonder
Why we all spread terror.
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6 comments:
gr8 going dee.
very original indeed....
keep practicing this way...and who knows some day i'll say my friend is a poet :)
OOPS Hidden talent is exposed...
Dee becomes a poet...
Nice post Dee...
Nice explanation of life to that of terrorism...
Keep it up cocodee...
my comment wouldnt be all praise
though well intended
the poem is really a gud start
but u shud always do away with the constraint of ending the lines with rhyming words
it really doesnt mater
note: strictly my personal opinion :P
A really gud one dee...good going..
simple yet successful...in describing the sinful act of terror ... good work dee....to me u seem like a writer dealing with some serious issues...quite introspective... like the way u handle all the issues that hav been bugging us ... kkeep goin'
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